Sunday, August 29, 2010

WK4: Andrieux Joseph Comments for Tamara Collins

First Paragraph is from Tamara Collins' Udutu Site. Click here to visit her site.

Tamara Collins
The Writing Process
Your objective is to learn how to complete the writing process for a five paragraph essay. After you listen to the introduction audio be sure to click on the first step to begin.
First Step: Pre-writing/brainstorming


@ Tamara - The color scheme of the site was very creative in providing a student a warm environment to go to and learn about writing. You provided extensive instruction to writing a paragraph.

The step by step delivery you provided is very effective for students needing remedial instruction. With some additional feedback, be careful with the volume.

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